Connor, I suggest that you go back to college. This is pretty terrible writing. I would encourage you to reevaluate your diction, syntax, lexicon, and punctuation. This piece is fatuous, and it presents errors such as dangling modifiers, comma-splices, passive-voice, and fragments. For example: "Heavy Restless" is the perfect second part to "Paper Courage," starting off exactly where the latter started with a guttural scream that is unparalleled, and plunging directly into the track." By putting a comma after "unparalleled" you deliberately separated an independent clause and a dependent clause; however, these clauses must never be separated in this way in conventional English--thus, we have a comma splice. Likewise, your writing is also incredibly pretentious. A myriad of the adjectives that you use simply satisfy your own ego whilst confusing your audience (who I assume has nothing more than a high school education if they are not drop-outs). Remember that you are writing to vagabonds, not the academic community. Tattoos, piercings, and "killer band T's" do nothing but diminish one's intellectual capacity. I actually sent this link to a fellow who would consider himself "hardcore," and he replied back with "wtf is this dood riting about? I just wanna listen to the shit. I mosh not read." Perhaps you should decide another field of work.