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Connor_McGaha

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March 28 2013 6:09 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Hailing from the Keystone state, Pray For Teeth is a heavy, heavy hardcore band that is redef...

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Bukowskilovescum
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April 1 2013 11:22 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Connor, I suggest that you go back to college. This is pretty terrible writing. I would encourage you to reevaluate your diction, syntax, lexicon, and punctuation. This piece is fatuous, and it presents errors such as dangling modifiers, comma-splices, passive-voice, and fragments. For example: "Heavy Restless" is the perfect second part to "Paper Courage," starting off exactly where the latter started with a guttural scream that is unparalleled, and plunging directly into the track." By putting a comma after "unparalleled" you deliberately separated an independent clause and a dependent clause; however, these clauses must never be separated in this way in conventional English--thus, we have a comma splice. Likewise, your writing is also incredibly pretentious. A myriad of the adjectives that you use simply satisfy your own ego whilst confusing your audience (who I assume has nothing more than a high school education if they are not drop-outs). Remember that you are writing to vagabonds, not the academic community. Tattoos, piercings, and "killer band T's" do nothing but diminish one's intellectual capacity. I actually sent this link to a fellow who would consider himself "hardcore," and he replied back with "wtf is this dood riting about? I just wanna listen to the shit. I mosh not read." Perhaps you should decide another field of work.

In Christ,
Your brother.
Connor_McGaha
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April 1 2013 11:31 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Thank you for your input, BukowskiLovesCum/Christbrotherdood. I'll make sure to remember my audience next time I accidentally committ a grammatical error--especially considering that your rebuke was so scattered and contradictory that I honestly have no idea what the point of your post was. But rest assured, user who signed up for a listener account to comment on my post, I'll do it for you. Thank you for this glorious revelation.
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April 1 2013 11:33 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
lol wut
Crack Pie
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April 1 2013 11:46 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Get em
Bukowskilovescum
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April 1 2013 11:51 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Originally posted by: R2E2

lol wut



^Vagabond: my point exactly.
Connor_McGaha
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April 1 2013 11:55 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
BukowskiEatsShit, you're the worst troll of all time. Thank you for correcting my comma splice. In fact, Kanye West (God) thanks you. Now, please scurry on back to your self-flagellation cave, and let me review music that I enjoy for the enjoyment of writing.

Hallelujah,
Holy Shit.
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April 2 2013 12:26 AM   QuickQuote Quote  
Originally posted by: Bukowskilovescum

Originally posted by: R2E2

lol wut



^Vagabond: my point exactly.



care to elaborate?
GordDaBoy
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April 2 2013 8:25 AM   QuickQuote Quote  
Band rips.
Bukowskilovescum
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April 2 2013 7:20 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
"lol wut" is not English, you fool.
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April 2 2013 7:22 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
it was meant as a joke reaction. you understand humor, don't you?
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April 2 2013 7:26 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
i love cum too
Bukowskilovescum
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April 2 2013 7:27 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Capitalize your sentences when you speak to me, young man.
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April 2 2013 7:27 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
how about no?
Bukowskilovescum
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April 2 2013 7:28 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Derelicts of society: please learn English before placing your oily fingers on a holy keyboard.
Bukowskilovescum
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April 2 2013 7:31 PM   QuickQuote Quote  
Connor, you support me in my divine endeavor, don't you?
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